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Josh Datko's avatar

Very nice audio work! I heard the no-music version and I thought it sounded great.

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Martin Garcia's avatar

Danny! This was fun to read and listen to. Most of the noises made it feel alive but I did not like the music too much, distracted me from the words, but it does feel like I am in the stands of a crowded event.

The description of Quetzle was my favorite and the continued use of red dust.

The description of Quetzle standing proud also made me smile. Did they he really lose? Seems to me that he met his goal.

Noticed something in the audio where it does not quite match the words.

-Fans from all over the sun system blended their cheers and jeers into a single unintelligible rumble.

-The winner would earn prestige and a shot to compete in ranked races.

Overall it was fun and I like the voice over.

Hope everything is going great for you!

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